

I received only this article for the post Valentine writing competition. and please readers read this piece and tell NSW what you think.
MY LITTLE LOVE STORY
That glorious night with scented candles! I wished it never to pass away as though I was in an exciting trance. It held the joy of a thousand years and took away the miseries of nations unborn. I spoke words and sang songs,travelled from generation to generation. It was his name i called. In the midst of those beautiful roses, I said these words:
silver rims line my heart
silver rims line my heart
with thoughts of swit moments
that fail by day to pass
now to my detriment
I think of you day n night
and now by morning, I seek;
ur whispers and smiles
that graces my day dreams
the warmth of my heart
now and then, I feel ur touch
all replay like yesterday
reaching for you at noontide
thats what you do to me
in different ways I can't explain
hmm! now I dance with the rhythm of volcanic eruptions, destructive but sensational, I speak in tongues of several languages, heavenly or angelic, I cant describe it all as am short of words and vocals, yawning or mawning, which sounds nicest? and now the day is gone till another 365, then ecstacy replays in our hearts once more and with that, I rest my case.
that fail by day to pass
now to my detriment
I think of you day n night
and now by morning, I seek;
ur whispers and smiles
that graces my day dreams
the warmth of my heart
now and then, I feel ur touch
all replay like yesterday
reaching for you at noontide
thats what you do to me
in different ways I can't explain
hmm! now I dance with the rhythm of volcanic eruptions, destructive but sensational, I speak in tongues of several languages, heavenly or angelic, I cant describe it all as am short of words and vocals, yawning or mawning, which sounds nicest? and now the day is gone till another 365, then ecstacy replays in our hearts once more and with that, I rest my case.
Author : Eruke Ojeuderie
Date written : Feb 17th 20011
Date submitted : 18th of February, 2011
email; Junediva@yahoo.com
